Dear Hamona

Achei a ideia ótima. É uma excelente motivação para um herói. A forma como você escolheu demonstrar a memória é muito bonita e a parte do escorregador é bem fofa, o que carrega ainda mais o sentimento da cena. Eu ri do Spark se jogando no mar pra nadar, pensei que ela ia reclamar da idade dele kkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

A escolha da música caiu muito bem no tema da cena. E essa parallax linda? Parabéns, Eli.

Hello friend. Your game cutscene is very beautiful. It's pretty sad.
 I think you should definitely explore that emotion more. It was good. 
What I think you should have improved is in the mapping because the 
mountain has all the same measurements and a mountain doesn't have 
this egalitarian shape on the sides. It is very irregular in its edges.
And I would recommend adding more weeds, leaves, flowers, since it is a 
region with a lot of grass, and where there is a lot of grass, there is 
life, and where there is life, there are other species of plants. If in 
doubt, study landscape photos. That's a good one. And I wish you good 
luck, my friend. See you on the podium.

What a heavy atmosphere that emanates from this scene, in perfect adequacy with the music. Being a father myself, I was very touched by this little story.

Technically, it's a very good job... the "memory" effect especially! Well thought and mastered, bravo.

The scene matches the music really well, and I really dig that memory scene. No idea how you'd do something like that XD

On a side note, regarding the cutscene: after the dad leaves, and Hamona tells Spark that she misses her dad, is it meant to just stop at a black screen? I tried playing the cutscene twice and it always seems to just hang at that point.